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Bless the Beta Readers

What happens when you write a book about basketball, journalism, and academic fraud? You need coaches, journalists, and sensitivity readers, that’s what. I am so grateful for the wisdom of my various readers. Below is the list of those who have helped me with reading my two biggest projects since 2013. In the last five years, I’ve written (and rewritten) two novels.Beta reader

No Small Thing

It began with a lot of research, and I can’t thank two people enough on the front end of that research–Sally Starrfield, educator and basketball fan, who led me to Michele Van Gorp, former WNBA and Duke player, who led me to other great resources such as Krista Gingrich and Payton Hobbs, former Duke players and current basketball coaches. I also interviewed Dan Kane of The News and Observer, and from those inspirational and informative conversations, a manuscript was born.

Then I handed off either pages or the whole 320-page baby off to readers. Thanks to all these wonderful folks who’ve been reading and commenting.

  • Jamye Abram, author and educator
  • Dan Kane, journalist
  • Krista Gingrich, basketball coach
  • Greg Hawks, basketball fan and athlete
  • Jennifer Puryear, author and blogger of Bacon on the Bookshelf
  • Cindy Salerno, basketball coach, athlete, and teacher
  • Michael Salerno, author and filmmaker
  • Hannah-Kathryn Wall, student
  • Natasha Wall, author and educator
  • My writers’ group: Amanda Gladin-Kramer, Russell Johnson, Stephanie Moore, and Becky Moynihan.
  • My wonderful parents, authors both: Stephen and Katherine Fairchild

The English teacher in me insists on pretty detailed rubrics. Here’s an example of some questions I peppered Dan Kane with, and ones below that are for Krista and Cindy:

Journalism:

  1. Are the principles of journalism that Audrey is learning accurate?
  2. On issues such as use of recordings, or allowing an interview subject to see their quotes before they go to press—is that good practice?rubric
  3. Redd Graye is supposed to be a stand-up journalist. Is there anything he says that is inaccurate or unethical?
  4. What do you think about Redd Graye’s character and his mentoring of Audrey? Whether it’s Redd’s writing or advice—feel free to edit it if it’s unrealistic or overwrought.

Basketball:

  1. Does how I portray high school basketball coaches seem fair and accurate?
  2. How authentic are the coaches’ locker-room speeches? If they don’t ring true, what wording or topics would be preferable? Feel free to line edit.
  3. How authentic are the players’ conversations? Line edits welcome!
  4. Do the teens—like Emma (center) and Serena (point) in particular—do they sound and act like players you would coach?

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Exciting news: Amy and I are revisiting this manuscript and I’m reworking Minerva’s age. These folks have done deep reads of several different versions of the novel.

  • Ashlie Canipe, educator
  • David Frauenfelder, author
  • Gordon Jack, author
  • Maureen Keathley, author
  • Margaret Velto, student
  • Jamey Widener-Reynolds, educator
  • Tracy Yale, author
  • Randy Yale, author
  • My family: Stephen and Katherine Fairchild, authors both; and my sister, Antonia Fairchild, actress, director, and educator

Thank you all! Your feedback has been instrumental to getting through this journey.

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Why Do You Assume You’re the Smartest in the Room?

Ever give someone feedback–nicely said, constructively given, solicited, in the appropriate context–and someone still gets mad? Mad because they didn’t think of it themselves? Cold and resentful because they suddenly aren’t the smartest person in the room?

Ever ask for feedback and proceed to get skewered by someone who makes the critique sharp, cold, and personal?

Fortunately, my writers’ group is the absolute opposite of that. And they just gave me a huge and timely piece of advice.

That scene on page 170? Move it to page 70, girl. ‘Cuz there’s your Catalyst. 

Oh my sweet Lord, they are so right.

I am grateful. This is how it gets done. You write, they read, you listen. You ruminate. Then you move in for the kill and rip those pages. Because nothing there is sacred.

I’m not the smartest person in the room. Some of my best ideas have come from my agent and my editors and my writers’ groups.

I get it: the What Ifs that suddenly open up when someone tells you to make a change–those are scary. When someone throws you a new What If, you better be Jedi Ready–not against them, but against the beast that is your bloated, mediocre manuscript (speaking for myself here). But to get mad? When our stock and trade is brainstorming and re-visioning?

I’m not really sure how you’ll survive as an author if you have to always be the first to think of things.

On the days where I’m feeling super-sensitive, and when the writing does not flow, and my goals seem light years away, I may be tempted to argue with the critic who presents a totally different view of my work. And sometimes, yes, that critic could be self-serving, or competitive, or just plain mean–but usually, there’s a grain of truth worth diving for.

“It’s soooooo looooooong,” complained an editor once, to whom I’d agreed to pay a lot of money for feedback. From the moment I eagerly sat down with her, she seemed strangely angry. Mad, even, that she had to read the manuscript. Then she proceeded to say some mean-spirited things. She even questioned the reality I was portraying (a story about teachers, as if I’d never been one and didn’t know who they were or how they acted.) She showed no curiosity as to what I’d experienced that perhaps I needed to describe better. I finally had to ask: is there anything worth salvaging? She sighed, shrugged, and said something nonspecific.

It was a memorable and yet unmemorable critique.

What was unsaid, but clearly there in the cold, reptilian gleam in her eye, was a resentment that I and my manuscript even existed. She was an editor who didn’t take joy from editing–in and of itself, a huge problem–but I also sensed then a competition, since she too was an author, regarding Who Would Make It. Everything in her body language said, I hope it’s never you. 

Get over yourselves, Those Who Need to Win. You wear me out with your tense and stingy lips, your nervous ears. I know your bad behavior is rooted in a deep insecurity, and a desire to be perfect. I get it; I have those same dark thoughts and urges, too.

Never mind me. You can block me out, because I won’t be chilling at the feedback table with you any longer. Pretend I didn’t write, and pretend I didn’t say anything about your writing. Good luck going it alone.

Meanwhile, the truth is still there: my manuscripts tend to be way too long. After licking my wounds post various takedowns in my life, I’ve realized that I needed to be a bit smarter. Write tighter. Plot better. And vet that editor before you agree to pay her.

You have to embrace feedback, and sometimes turn the other cheek while it hurts. First and foremost, seek those who give and take feedback openly, who come with an open, joyful energy to the process. Where the attitude is flex, and the love of the work, paramount. Where there’s not power struggle or oneupmanship. Where ego is on the shelf.

The badge I seek at the end of this life is, She told a damn good story. I hope everyone is there with me at the finish line. I see us there, laughing and feasting, all very smart together, with plenty of room at the banquet table.